Run-on sentences and comma splices
A run-on sentence joins two independent clauses without adequate punctuation or a conjunction. The most common form is the comma splice: two complete sentences held together by only a comma. Fix a run-on in four ways: a full stop, a semicolon, a coordinating conjunction, or a subordinating conjunction.
The rule
Four ways to fix a run-on sentence
Full stop
Clause. Clause.
The lift broke down. We climbed nine floors.
Semicolon
clause; clause
The lift broke down; we climbed nine floors.
Coordinator
clause,for/and/nor/but/or/yet/soclause
The lift broke down, so we climbed nine floors.
Subordinator
Because/When/Althoughclause,clause
Because the lift broke down, we climbed nine floors.
Inside a sentence
The lift broke down,clause + commasofor/and/nor/but/or/yet/sowe climbed nine floors.clause
BecauseBecause/When/Althoughthe lift broke down,clausewe climbed nine floors.clause
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How to use run-on sentences and comma splices
What is a run-on sentence?
A run-on sentence forces two (or more) independent clauses together without a legal join. When nothing at all stands between the clauses, it is called a fused sentence; when only a comma stands between them, it is a comma splice. Both count as the same underlying error: clauses that deserve their own sentences have been run together.
Length has nothing to do with it. A sixty-word sentence with correct joins is grammatical, and an eight-word sentence can be a run-on. The test is structural: find the subject-verb cores, then check what connects them.
- The tide came in the boats returned to harbour.fused, two clauses, no join → The tide came in, and the boats returned to harbour.
- Night fell, and the generators hummed into life across the camp.correctly joined; length is not the problem
What is a comma splice?
A comma splice joins two independent clauses with only a comma. The comma is a separator inside sentences; it cannot carry the weight of a boundary between them. Splices are probably the single most common punctuation error in IELTS essays, partly because several other languages punctuate exactly this way.
The test is mechanical: cover everything left of the comma and read the right side alone; then swap. If both halves stand as complete sentences, the comma between them is a splice and needs upgrading.
- The library extended its hours, students still queued for seats.both halves are complete sentences → …extended its hours, but students still queued…
- Enrolment doubled, the university hired forty new lecturers.→ Enrolment doubled, so the university hired forty new lecturers.
- After the merger was announced, staff began updating their CVs.the first part is a dependent clause, this comma is correct
What are the four ways to fix a run-on?
Every run-on has the same four repairs. One: a full stop, split it into two sentences. Two: a semicolon, when the clauses are closely related and you want them in one breath. Three: a comma plus a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, so). Four: a subordinator (because, although, when), which demotes one clause and states the logic between them.
For IELTS, the fourth fix is the profitable one. It doesn't just remove the error; it manufactures a complex sentence and names the relationship (cause, contrast, time) between your ideas, feeding both Grammatical Range and Coherence at once.
- The visa was refused. We postponed the trip.fix 1: full stop
- The visa was refused; we postponed the trip.fix 2: semicolon
- The visa was refused, so we postponed the trip.fix 3: comma + coordinator
- Because the visa was refused, we postponed the trip.fix 4: subordinator, the IELTS-friendly repair
Why doesn't 'however' fix a comma splice?
However, therefore, moreover, consequently, and nevertheless are conjunctive adverbs, not conjunctions. They comment on the link between ideas, but they have no grammatical power to join clauses, so 'clause, however clause' is still a comma splice, with an adverb sitting on top of it.
The repair is fixed and worth memorising: semicolon (or full stop) before the adverb, comma after it. This trap catches even strong candidates, because however feels exactly like but; grammatically, it behaves like an ordinary adverb such as unfortunately.
- The trial succeeded, however the funding was cut.→ The trial succeeded; however, the funding was cut.
- The trial succeeded. However, the funding was cut.full stop before, comma after
- Prices fell; therefore, demand recovered.semicolon before, comma after
How much do run-ons cost in IELTS writing?
The Band 7 writing descriptor requires 'good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors'. One splice in an essay reads as a slip; three or more read as a system, and systematic punctuation faults are precisely what hold otherwise strong essays at Band 6. Splices also tax Coherence and Cohesion, because the reader keeps re-parsing where one idea ends and the next begins.
Speaking is unaffected: there is no punctuation in speech, which makes run-ons a purely writing-side gate, and one of the cheapest band-points to claim: two minutes of targeted proofreading removes the entire error class.
- Tourism brings revenue, it also strains water supplies, governments must balance both.chained splices, the classic Band 6 sentence
- Tourism brings revenue, but it also strains water supplies, so governments must balance both.same ideas, legally joined
Common mistakes with run-on sentences and comma splices
Find what is wrong in each one, then open it to check.
1The city is growing fast, the roads cannot cope.What's wrong? Show the fix
The city is growing fast, so the roads cannot cope.
A comma alone cannot join two independent clauses; add a coordinator, or use a semicolon or full stop.
2I submitted the essay early, however I forgot the reference list.What's wrong? Show the fix
I submitted the essay early; however, I forgot the reference list.
However is an adverb, not a conjunction; it needs a semicolon or full stop before it and a comma after it.
3Some people prefer trains they are cheaper than flying.What's wrong? Show the fix
Some people prefer trains because they are cheaper than flying.
A fused sentence has no join at all; a subordinator repairs it and states the logical link.
4The results were surprising, this proves the method works.What's wrong? Show the fix
The results were surprising, which suggests the method works.
'…, this + verb' splices a new sentence onto the old one; use ', which' or start a fresh sentence with This.
5Online degrees are flexible, therefore many professionals choose them.What's wrong? Show the fix
Online degrees are flexible, so many professionals choose them.
Therefore cannot join clauses with a comma; either use the coordinator so, or write 'flexible; therefore, many…'.
6It started raining we moved the party indoors.What's wrong? Show the fix
It started raining, so we moved the party indoors.
Two independent clauses need a comma plus coordinator (or stronger punctuation) between them, not empty space.
Practise
Write your own
Write a sentence of your own with run-on sentences and comma splices, about you, your studies or your town.
Run-on sentences and comma splices in IELTS
Speaking
- Run-ons technically don't exist in speech, but their spoken cousin does: the breathless “and then… and so… and then…” chain. Land your sentences: finish a clause with falling intonation, pause, and start fresh. Examiners hear sentence boundaries even without punctuation.
- Record a Part 2 answer and transcribe one minute of it with punctuation. If you cannot decide where the full stops go, neither can a listener; practise until your transcript punctuates itself.
Writing
- Reserve two minutes at the end of Task 2 for the comma test: at every comma, check whether both sides could stand alone as sentences. If they can, upgrade the join with so, but, because, or a semicolon. This single pass removes a systematic error and protects the Band 7 phrase 'good control of grammar and punctuation'.
- Treat however and therefore as sentence-starters, not joiners: full stop or semicolon before, comma after. If you only memorise one punctuation rule for IELTS, make it this one: the however-splice is the most common advanced-learner error examiners see.